This is my rocket story.
I liked writing the whole story but my favourite part was writing the last paragraph.
I am still wondering if I could add more detail to my writing.
Thursday, April 30, 2020
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Well done for writing your story in paragraphs. Your story had an interesting surprise - the moon was cheese!
ReplyDeleteTo help add detail to your writing continue to use strong adjectives that paints a picture in the readers head.
Exciting narrative, Liam! I am wondering what type of food spacemen would eat in rockets? Mmm food for thought! 🤔
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