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Tuesday, April 28, 2020

Kite poem


This is my kite poem.
 I learnt how to make a cinquain poem.
I wonder how many words describe kites.
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3 comments:

  1. Koka MichelleApril 28, 2020 at 1:08 PM

    Thanks for this descriptive poem, Liam. You have created an image in my mind about how kites move in the air! Ka Pai Liam 😎

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  2. Mrs SpenceApril 28, 2020 at 2:49 PM

    Well done Liam, great choice of words to describe the movement of a kite flying in the sky.
    lucky, we have some wind now, great for kite flying.

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  3. Rachel ParkerApril 29, 2020 at 9:35 PM

    I enjoyed your poem Liam. Swooping is a fabulous word! I liked how the shape of your words made a diamond too. Well done!

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